Nowadays children are spending far too much time and money on computer games. As a result, some people even suggest that video games should be done away with. They are nothing but a great waste of time, money and energy. I totally agree with them.

如今孩子們花過多的金錢和時間在電腦游戲上。結果，一些人甚至建議說電子游戲應該廢除。它們只不過是大量消耗時間、金錢和精力的東西。我完全同意他們的說法。

First of all, too much indulgence in the computer games may lead to the deterioration of children’s physical health. Children desert the football ground as they all sit at home around the computers playing the football game. So they can’t be physically fit and strong. Moreover, facing the computer for a long time, children easily suffer from myopia.

首先，過多沉溺于電腦游戲會導致孩子們身體健康狀況的下降。孩子們全都呆在家里，坐在電腦旁邊，玩足球游戲，而荒廢了足球場。所以他們不會身體強健。而且，長時間對著電腦，孩子們很容易近視。

Secondly, computer games distract children’s attention from their studies. They finish their homework in a hurry, or even copy their classmate’s, in order to squeeze time to play games.

其次，電腦游戲分散孩子們的學習注意力。他們匆匆趕完作業，甚至抄襲同學的作業，為了擠出時間來玩游戲。

Therefore, video arcades should be banned from cities and town. Teenagers would be much better off without the temptation of video games. They should be encouraged to do more meaningful and valuable things like reading, studying, and going to concert and museums.

因此，游戲廳應該在城市和鄉鎮中禁止。沒有電子游戲的誘惑，青少年會過得好得多。他們應該被鼓勵做些更有意義和價值的事情，如讀書、學習、去聽音樂會或逛博物館。

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