In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.

在當今社會，隨著互聯網的飛速發展，網上購物已經成為一種時尚，尤其是青少年。

Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study. In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and we can save much money through online shopping.

網上購物讓我們的生活變得更加方便和舒適。首先，在網上購物可以節省大量的時間，這樣他們就有更多的精力和時間花在學習上了。第二，互聯網為消費者提供了各種各樣的商品，而且我們還可以節省很多錢。

However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings. We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face communication with sellers. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.

然而，每個硬幣都有兩面，網上購物也有其缺點。在網上我們可能會買到一些假的產品因為無法面對面與賣家溝通。更重要的是，物流也會增加商品損壞的風險。

Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We should follow the footsteps of the times.

權衡這兩種觀點，我更傾向于前者因為網上購物在我們日常生活中越來越重要了。我們應該要跟上時代的腳步。

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